Write me a Haiku!








Haiku (俳句 ) is a kind of Japanese poetry. It usually combines three different lines, with a distinct grammatical break, called kireji, usually placed at the end of either the first five or second seven sound units. The first line usually contains five syllables, the second line seven syllables and the third line, five syllables. In Japanese, there are actual kireji words but in English, kireji is often replaced with commas, hyphens or implied breaks in the haiku. Haiku does not have to rhyme but it must paint a mental image in the reader's mind.

Dear Bougainvillea

Wave with grace and glee

Teasing passerby

You will write me a Haiku, won't you?



Comments

Anonymous said…
I love those shots and thes flowers! But no, I can't write Haiku;)
footiam said…
Thanks for visiting! Never mind if there is no Haiku.
mellowed blues said…
I'm going to try to do a Haiku too:

oh purple flower,
wilting in the hottest sun,
watching time fly by.
footiam said…
Thanks! I like your Haiku! But it sounds sad.
mellowed blues said…
I know. First haiku attempt.
footiam said…
Thanks, Mellowed blues!
thuanhee said…
dear japanese rose
sprawling in colourful tones
delightful so
footiam said…
Not bad! But it's all bunga kertas here la.